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"And the winner is.....Simone Yvette." Everybody is clapping and cheering for me. I can't believe it. I got best new artist. Suddenly, I realized i was still seated. Simone, Simone." I heard somebody chant. "Get up, Now!" That's when I recgonized the voice. It was the wicked-witch, Rachel. "Ms.Rachel to juvinelles she always says. In case you are wondering my mom died. Apparently, but deep down inside my i can feel the truth. She is out there somewhere. But the problem is what the truth is not the truth? Thats What i feear. The fact that Rachel never gets all the details of her story right is what makes me feel this way. She stutters and its not like she has a speech impedement or anything. Only when she tells her little story. Or should i call it a fable? Then, she changes "scene order". Stuff like "The lady at the hospital wanted to keep you but she could'nt." I know. Stupid huh? Hey, it was Rachel's words not mine.The funny funny part is another time she said "Your grandmother rang on my doorbell and she had you in the cutest little basket with a note saying: 'Dear Maam/Dear Sir, Please watch over my grandbaby for me. I can,t afford her nor Do I think I will be able to live long enough. If I do, I will return when she is 16 and old enough to pretty much fend for herself. Thanks In Advanced, Lydian' "And my heart was just so touched by it I just didn't know what to do." I was just thinking like Rachel, Isn't that a bit cartoonish? Just a little bit? Apparently it never dawned on her that I'm smarter than that. It's clear that she thinks i'm stupid. That kinds of stuff happens over and over again in fairytales. The parent cant keeep the child for whatever circumstances so they put them in a basket. They pick a random house which they think looks nice and writes a note asking for the owner to take careof their child. Then they ring the dooebell and the owner takes a child they probably didn't want in the first place. After so many years the parent returns. Wait a minute wasn't that in the bible? Im pretty sure it was. Well see what happens. If she returns. Im 15 so half a year to go.